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The Exchange P2-P3 part 1

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Ok heres where i pick up my paralell of =toddlergirl's the exchange. I Renamed it since =cloneditto titles his the exchange paralell but i shortenten the title due to Limited Title spacing and to avoid a total rip off. Any P2 will be of Andrea with powers and closer to Sandra's age P3 will be the revision with Andrea being the 3rd youngest exchange student and her only power being able to tap into the collective at young age as she had wrote into her recent part/chapter. However for this part rather than write 2 seperate first chapters the Beginning story line aka part 1 will be the same for both versions so without further ado heres is how Andrea joined the exchange if you can call it that:

***Note: % complete will complete later**


Andrea Jones was an interesting to be sure. Andrea was a herm meaning he/she was half male and half female. She had a hard life growing up and even her own  family chatised her. The mere mention of her condition was considered a taboo. Her slightly dimented grandmother had always called her the odd duck of the family while her cousins teased her. Generally she had always embraced her female side more though she dressed and acted like a guy at times too. She however kept this secret from most of her friends. Andrea was 22 years old 5ft 6 with brown hair and  hazel eyes. She was a very smart woman and specialized in computers. She had taken several college computer courses including web design. She also was quite fortunate though as she had recently won the largest lottery jackpot in her countries history, 499 million dollars to be exact but dispite that she kept her day job. She worked from home and lived in a luxorious town home in the united states of America and worked for an awesome website called deviantART as The Senior Beta Tester. Her job was to act as a sort of middleman between the sites members and Admins when testing new site features but also as most members she also utilized the sites artistic benifits often writing many stories for others to enjoy. She had it good until one day that would change her life. Andrea was in her living room 1 morning on her laptop having an online chat with the creative team of deviantART brainstorming new ideas for the website. 1 of the most absurd so far had been to make journal entries mandatory. was in the midts of typing when her doorbell rang. "Thats odd i wasn't expecting any visitors" she groaned as she walked to her front door and answered it. "Look whatever the hell you're selling i aint interested" she said bitterly having been visited by more door to door salesmen than all of Australia and the us combined. The man at the door took off his trench coat while  his partner, a woman glared intently. The man was about 5ft 8 with black hair and a beard that could rival moses. He appeared to be in his 50's. The woman was about 6ft tall with blue hair and brown eyes. "Ahem are you Andrea Jones" asked the man. "Yes but how do you know my name weirdo" asked Andrea. "Lets just say we have a use for you" replied the man before the woman shot Andrea with some kind of tranquilizer dart thingy. Andrea fell to the floor in a heap. "Damn wasn't that a bit over the top" groaned the man. "Who cares its your fault we are so behind schedule. You just had to oggle that Sandra woman before we left the facility you darn pervert" scolded the woman as the man picked up Andrea and groped her a little. "What just because we are on the job doesn't mean we can't have some fun and besides miss hypocrite you were eying some guy named Lycian just because he wrote your favorite book ya darn fangirl" shouted the man as he loaded Andrea int the back of the van. "Whatever lets just get out of here" said the woman as she got into the drivers side of the van. Later Andrea awoke on a table in the same room that Lycian and Sandra had been in just hours ago as she spoted a list of names both of which had been crossed off. A woman entered the room presumably the same whom tested them. "Ah i see you are awake? About time we are so far behind schedule its crazy" said the woman. "Ugh my head hurts" said Andrea. "Sorry that can't be helped. The collectors that brought you here were a tad rough andv we also have had to rush you through testing. Now please complete that puzzle next to you" she explained quickly then pointed to a puzzle. "Fine whatever" replied Andrea as she sleepily grabbed the puzzle regardless of still being affected by the drugs she had been given. She completed the puzzle in about 3 and half minutes. "Wow impressive now then write down the words on the list" the woman ordered as she handed Andrea the piece of paper she was holding. She had just finished when she was poked in the back with a needle. "What the hell" said Andrea. "Must you keep doing that Lryian" asked the exam woman. " Anyway all i can tell you is you have been selected for The Exchange Program" the woman said before Andrea fell once more into sleep. Once more she woke up this time in some lab. She heard voices buzzing around her but her vision was blurred. "You idiot i told you that you are being to hasty to perform the procedure on the subject" Andrea hold a voice yell before she was once more poke with a needle and plunged into sleep once more. She woke up after what felt like forever feeling very Groggy.


This is where the 2 versions will diverge though some similiarities will be noticeable and intention.
Hope you enjoyed ^^; Heres the begining of Andrea's exchange experience. I shall post some more soon ^^;
and to =cloneditto please do not judge too harshly. i wrote this in the style you 2 both seem to use and pulled another all nighter ^^; Also its not my worst rush but still certain factors once more caused me to rush more than i would have liked ^^; sorry. Also the chapters or "Parts" may be smaller than you and =toddlergirl are used too but i've never really been one for long chapters aside from the rare deviation or 2 ^^;
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